FEEDBACK

We got feedback from our teacher dan, so that we could know if we were ready to post it as our finished music video. he gave us some feedback and we are going to work on it and then we are FINALLY FINSHED!!!! WOOHOOOO

He said that we need to sync the first shot where she is singing, and we need to fix a shot where we cut here signing and go to a different location. he also said that we need to put an echo effect on the last shot to make it look like its coming to an ending. we took on board what he said and fixed it. 

Me and Azeemah worked on the feedback that Dan gave us and we made it better. here are the changes that we made: 

This is the shot at the beginning, i sat there for quit a while and thought of how i could make it flow better and how it could look better and i decoded to add a cross dissolve transition on it. it worked really well: 

THIS IS THE LAST SHOT: WE PUT AN ECHO EFFECT ON IT SO IT  LOOKED LIKE IT IS TRAILING: