The Ancillary Pitch.

This is my pitch that I did for Dan. He said that my album cover was good but the picture of Renee needs to be much bigger on the front cover. i explained to him that it will be bigger, it's just that I drew her too small. For the inside he said that the two different covers looked quite random and that it would be better to have one picture over both sides. I have a shot of the london Eye on my plan which he said would be a better image to use. as for my advert, Dan said that the clouds that i use in the background will have to photoshopped because the current weather isn't that bright and so to achieve the colour I want, I will need to photoshop. He said that my idea reminded him of a previous students work, a student called Sylvda. The cartoon effect is what we have in common, as well as the clouds. This is what her digipak looked like.

I really like the album cover because of the bright colours used. I don't really like the advert much because I feel like theres too many colours on it. Even though these are the colours on the album I think that theres too many for the advert. I want my advert to be much simpler.