Pitch Feedback.

On Thursday we presented out pitch to the class. It went well, aside from the small malfunction of the link to our animatic. But anyways, back to the point, the feedback. Dan told us that our pitch was pretty good. Some points he said that we could improve on were:

Artists branding/image - When we talked about our artist we talked about them in the same way we described out audience. This wasn't what we were meant to do. We should have talked about the image of our artist and the style of their music and what type of audience hey would attract. When actually making our pitch we did use the audience sheet for our artist as well as our audience which was where we went wrong.
Structure - Dan mentioned that we didn't really have a structure to our video. Aside from the chorus being organised, we just planned to film people and different areas. We didn't really specify in which order it was going to go in. Which makes sense, because we havent really planned it out properly. So that's something we need to do. Pronto.
Grafitti - The final kind of point was that Grafitti didn't really fit in with the style of our video. Which makes sense. Dan told us that it didn't really fit in with the theme of our song and I agree. So he advised us to film it just a backup of backups. As our last resort.